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BANG BANG BANG!

“____, I know you are in there.” Your Drunk Boyfriend yelled.

“……”

“If you don’t get out here right now I will Bust down this Door!”

“……”

BANG BANG BANG!

Tears were slowly falling from my eyes as I was in the corner of the bedroom, with my Knees held to my chest.

Every time when ______ goes out with his friends, they go out drinking, and I always get tortured through the aftermath. I try to escape from this Hell hole, but there is nowhere to go. My parents died a long time ago, and I don’t have enough money to buy a house for myself. I am stuck here going through endless amounts of Pain.

BANG BANG!

Just someone save me..

BANG BANG BA---

The Door to the Bedroom was knocked off the Hinges and the Drunk man walked through.

“Next time I say Open the door. You better open the Door.” He grabbed me from the collar of my shirt, and slammed my back into the wall behind me. _____ lifted his Free had getting ready to attack, very quickly the fist was getting closer to me, but the only thing I was going through my mind was ‘Conceal, don’t feel.’ The fist made direct contact with my stomach, I was successful with holding back the tears, but not the blood that I spitted out of my mouth.

He slammed me against the wall a couple of times, making a dent that I would later have to repair. ____ lifted me higher up in the air until his arm was fully straight, and he let go of my body, allowing me to fall back to the ground, and cough up so more blood. Even though I was on the ground _____ wasn’t done yet. He walked over to my body and roughly placed his foot on my chest, and slowly digging in as I screamed out in pain, as the feeling of my ribs slowly breaking.

_____ lifted me up by the hair, and continuously Punch me, until I felt I was bruised all over. At one point, he just stopped. He let go of my hair, and allowed me to tumble towards the ground, as he just walked out of the room.

I laid on the ground in the blood I coughed up, but even though ______, was gone I had the feeling I was being watched. I slowly pulled my head off the ground and looked out my window. Outside, sitting on a branch of the tree, was a man. The strangest thing was that his eyebrows were burnt off, his mouth was carved into a smile, his hair was like midnight black, but his skin was the opposite, pure white. He held a knife in his hand, and pointed at my computer.

I walked over to my computer, checking everything, but there was nothing new. Then out of nowhere the screen turned Black, and green writing appeared on the screen. It was a message, and it looked like it had a Username too. The message read:

BEN – Shhhh.

I didn’t know who this BEN was or even why he was telling me to Shush.

Then I heard footsteps coming back into the room, and I knew ____ wasn’t finished. Through the doorway ______ face appeared, and in his hand was a broken bottle. _____ grabbed me by the hair once again and brought the broken bottle towards my throat. I looked over his shoulder, and noticed my computer was doing something strange, but I could hardly tell from my world going blurry.

In the computer screen, there was a shape of a figure, most likely a human figure. The figure brought a finger toward its mouth and made the ‘Shhhhh’ gesture. Then slowly my world faded to black.

.:Timeskip:.

I woke up still in the bedroom, and still alive. I stood up from my feet, and went to walk around to find where ____ is. I checked every room and he was nowhere to be seen, but I found some blood on the floors, and I guessed it was mine.

I went into the bathroom to clean up my cuts. I tried to flick on the lights but they just wouldn’t turn on. Something was up. I went away from the bathroom to grab a flashlight and came back in. Everything seemed normal, except the shower curtains were up as if someone was in there. However there was no water running.

I pulled back the curtains to find ______, in the most horrific state. His eyes has bloodied Xs cut into them. He was missing an arm, and he had a rope around his neck that was hooked to the bathroom ceiling.

I ran out of the bathroom, and back into my bedroom. The only thing that was going through my mind was ‘ Did I do this when I blacked out? ‘ but then I remember the man outside my window, and the figure in the computer screen. Or were they just part of my imagination.

I got off the ground I walked towards my computer screen, and noticed everything was normal. Then from behind me I felt a pressure hit the back of my neck, that made me pass out.

.:Timeskip:.

I woke up in an usual room, on the giant bed. It looked like it was the morning, since light was coming in through the windows. The room was pretty boring, a bed, a closet, a desk with a computer, and that’s it.

The computer screen turned on, but there was no one there. Then the monitor turned black, and out came a figure. It climbed out of the monitor and into the room. The figure was a man (could be a boy, since he wasn’t that tall XD), he had dirty blonde hair, pale peach skin, green tunic, and hat, but he also had Black eyes with blood red pupils.

The figure came closer to me, and I backed up farther next to the wall. He had a cocky smile on his face, and then he said “The names BEN.” My brain started processing the name BEN to see if I remembered it from somewhere. Then I remember from my computer, and that strange user.

“ Did you save me?”

“Yeah! well technically Jeff, and I helped you escape. Also ya know when someone tells you there name you should tell them yours in return.”

“Oh My name is ______. And Thank you.” His Cocky Smile grew bigger for some reason.

“ Well, now I have a question for you.”

“Hmmm?”

“What Size are you?” He said pointing at my chest, which made me blush redder than a tomato.

This is my Birthday Present for :iconcassius326: She wanted a story with BEN in it.

I am sorry if BEN is OOC, i tried to write him properly ;-;

Also i don't own Creepypasta, or the picture. But the Story is all me

AND ONE MORE THING! 

:iconcassius326: HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY!! :3

Dino with a lolly Pointing Emoticon of a Cute Little Dinosaur 
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:iconkazumi990:
Kazumi990 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  New member Student General Artist
Lol a course BEN asked that question at the end. XD Silly Paddle La 
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Skull-Monster13 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
Best question EVER !!
Tipical BEN
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
What Size am I? simple BEN.... Axe sized... *takes out an Axe and almost cuts his arm off*
BEN: -_- I like this arm its my gaming arm...
Me: I DONT CARE *swings axe* >:L
BEN: fuuuu *dodging* JEFF I NEED SOME HELP IN HERE >_<
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ShadowxScarlet109 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
Oh BEN. As perverted as always I see.
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Amberpelt7 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student General Artist
i love this!
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lunaflyaway Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
I don't really read creepypasta reader inserts, but this was interesting. Good job.
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bunnyfunnygirl Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Artist
Pfffffft this was a good story... That ending though..., XD had me rolling
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Cassius326 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks so much! I love it!! :iconlinkrapefaceplz: (I couldn't find a BEN one...) the end though xD
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XxSamishixX Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
That's the only thing i thought of... XD
Yay! and now i have to think of a story for 50th Watcher now ;-;.... it looks like it's going to be Calem (greeeaaat gotta type french in XD )
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Zerokiryulover210 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
this is awesome!!!Eyeless Jack 
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